You could call this Round 1, Group 1 since it's only the first 8 poets. But since I'm a little short of time I'll have to have Round 1, Group 2 tomorrow or Tuesday. But here you go (I hope this captures the essence of Schomburg's fun poetry tournament exercise):
* * *
Ethan Paquin, "[people are/wherever there's clouds/starry curvature]"
vs.
Joshua Beckman, "Lament for the Death of a Bullfighter"
WINNER: Joshua Beckman, "Lament for the Death of a Bullfighter"
* * *
Anthony McCann, "Father of Noise Ceremony"
vs.
Ellen Dudley, "The Bats"
WINNER: Anthony McCann, "Father of Noise Ceremony" - it was close but McCann nailed the ending like a gymnast nailing a dismount from a pommel horse.
* * *
Rod Smith, "the egret says..."
vs.
Joan Houlihan, "Squall Line"
WINNER: Joan Houlihan, "Squall Line"
* * *
Susan Grimm, "Green Wave"
vs.
Jim Daniels, "The Dark Planet"
WINNER: Jim Daniels, "The Dark Planet" - this one was close as well but its hard to compete with Daniels' ending:
"A smudge at memory's edge: love's
tender silence. Footsteps." (ll. 9-10)
I really love the simple yet stark language alongside the haunting footsteps.
* * *
Joshua Beckman, "Lament for the Death of a Bullfighter"
WINNER: Joshua Beckman, "Lament for the Death of a Bullfighter"
* * *
Anthony McCann, "Father of Noise Ceremony"
vs.
Ellen Dudley, "The Bats"
WINNER: Anthony McCann, "Father of Noise Ceremony" - it was close but McCann nailed the ending like a gymnast nailing a dismount from a pommel horse.
* * *
Rod Smith, "the egret says..."
vs.
Joan Houlihan, "Squall Line"
WINNER: Joan Houlihan, "Squall Line"
* * *
Susan Grimm, "Green Wave"
vs.
Jim Daniels, "The Dark Planet"
WINNER: Jim Daniels, "The Dark Planet" - this one was close as well but its hard to compete with Daniels' ending:
"A smudge at memory's edge: love's
tender silence. Footsteps." (ll. 9-10)
I really love the simple yet stark language alongside the haunting footsteps.
* * *
So, the forthcoming Round 2 for the first group will be:
Joshua Beckman, "Lament for the Death of a Bullfighter"
vs.
Anthony McCann, "Father of Noise Ceremony"
and
Joan Houlihan, "Squall Line"
vs.
Jim Daniels, "The Dark Planet"
vs.
Anthony McCann, "Father of Noise Ceremony"
and
Joan Houlihan, "Squall Line"
vs.
Jim Daniels, "The Dark Planet"
The host city will be Syracuse, NY for Group 1 (this is a NCAA hoops reference).
1 comment:
Schomburg's post is from 10/25/08
and I don't think anyone from that group is going to beat Beckman...
Just saying.
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